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Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Writing a good hook...

For this assignment, write down a good hook for a story. Remember that the hook is what makes the reader want to finish your story so do your best and let's see what you can come up with!
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7 comments:

  1. Nic L.Mar 9, 2010, 11:38:00 AM

    one day a spaceship lands on the playground. it is covered in turrets. aliens step out, their guns at the ready. they look mad.

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  2. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:40:00 AM

    Nice opening...Nic or do you want me to call you Jerry?
    Mark o.0

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  3. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:43:00 AM

    Lt.Mcdonalds says omg iam mia

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  4. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:45:00 AM

    Lt.Mcdonalds says the cannons on my ship fire french fries.

    By Jaker

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  5. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:49:00 AM

    A spaceship lands at your school. Tall, slimy creatures step out and point their weapons at everyone. One of them fires a shot, blowing up part of the school.
    Mark

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  6. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:49:00 AM

    Staring at a vast ocean of black. I threw the bottle in. SPLASH! Now all I could do was wait until someone found the note inside and came....

    -Emily

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  7. AnonymousMar 9, 2010, 11:54:00 AM

    Once upon a time an eleven year-old girl named Ale,went for a walk in the woods, and found a little cottage. There was no one there.

    Alesha

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